Saturday, September 1, 2012

Spectator Sport: Bitec Bangna


I woke up in the early morning; my face was really slimy and wanted to sleep more. My hasty mother keeps on speeding me up until I finished. At least I went on an old car and my fascinating father started it then quickly drove it to send me at the nice EIS. I thought that today I will enjoy myself to the best because we’re going to an interesting field trip! And that was the beginning of my 981 words story about this field trip.
When I first arrived at this nice school, EIS, I saw mellow people started to be happy and exciting about this incoming high school field trip. But not for so long that my creepy friend (not going to mention his unknown name) walks to me and with his eagle eyes told me that he saw many beautiful people whose clothes are transparent. I was creped out and tried as hard as possible to ignore his tempting speech. After having a five days per week flag line up, we EIS high school students waited for the big bus to arrive. Not so long when the big bus arrived, we quickly went on that big bus and were chilling on it until we reach our destination. From my point of view, I saw really flamboyant buildings which is really huge when I’m on the big bus and I thought that we could go in there right away after we came down from the bus. I also think like wow this will be the place where we could see many beautiful and wonderful things. But suddenly, after I went down from the bus, my mood was suddenly switched by the hot weather outside the huge building which really affected me. Then the strict security guards told me and other wonderful people from EIS to wait outside in the cool shelter. At that time we were in the state of confusion because we couldn’t find our main homeroom teachers. Not so long the state of the confusion disappeared and we started to get the grip of ourselves and finally able to went in that huge building.

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When I went in, my skinny body was satiated and refreshed by the cool air which made me feel a lot better compared to the effect of the hot place outside. At the first glance in the large exhibition hall inside the huge building, I could barely see the exhibitions because there were so many unknown people walking by. I and my cool friends were waiting for the dense crowd to go somewhere else by talking about some funny topics but we later realized that it doesn’t work at all. I also saw many EIS teachers waiting with us. At last, we decided to just charge in that dense crowd and observe the exhibitions for Mr. Amazing Felix work. But my cool friends first decided to do Mr. Chemistry (not going to mention his marvelous name also but I think most of you might know his name) work first and tried to call their last member of the group. First I thought that it wouldn’t take so long to make that final member to arrive to where we are. But things went so ironic that it took my friends half an hour to just meet up with their final member to just take photos for Mr. Chemistry work. After finishing the easy but long work of Mr. Chemistry, I and my friends went around to look for the exhibitions that we could write down for Mr. Amazing Felix work. Then again things went ironic that we couldn’t find any place to write on so we decided to write on each other rough back until we found the place to write properly. Along the way, we found an nauseous exhibition called ‘space ball’, when I saw people went in that roundly space ball and were spin round and round and round in which I wonder that after they came off from that nauseous thing, why don’t they vomit out, I feel like those people who went in that nauseous space ball have a really tough sense of dizziness.  After watching that amazing thing, we finally found a place to write on and finished Mr. Amazing Felix work in an instant. Now that our objectives are complete, we went for the mellow lax on the exhibition hall, I and my friends scattered to go and look for something else interesting. After I had walked around the whole exhibition hall, I just realized that this place were so crowded that I couldn’t notice anything interesting and catching to me. So bored of these uninterested exhibitions, I quickly find my friends proceeded to our field trip groups.


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On the mid afternoon, we went to find some cheap place with yummy food to eat. But it seems impossible in this huge building for us to find this kind of wonderful place so we went down to the bottom underground floor and ate at the tidy food court. I was so kind of shock that the food in here were very expensive and so plain, I kind of think that the food that were sold around the cloudy streets were a lot more delicious and cheap than the food we ate here. After eating this plain lunch, we walked around the crowded underground area until 12:30 p.m. if my sense of remembering was correct, Ms. Dependable Esther came to us and told us that the big buses were arriving and we should be going out by now. We then quickly and went to reunite with our EIS group and went inside our assigned big buses. When we were checking the preceding attendance, there were two lost people missing from our big bus so we try any possible ways to contact them. My concerned friends that seat beside me tried to call for them but it doesn’t work out. When the big bus nearly around 1:00 p.m., they just suddenly appeared on our big bus and every concerned people felt relieved. I felt like we could at last say good bye to this place and went back to our dear EIS.
When I arrived at the dear EIS, I promised myself that I wouldn’t go to that boorish Bitec Bangna again as much as possible unless it would be my last and final resting place. Also, thank you people who read my long and detailed Spectator Sport story until the end.    

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    1. I can sum up my feelings about this essay with one word, "Roll on the floor laughing". I like that you intentionally (or not?) humorously alter people's name (like Mr. Amazing Felix and Mr. Chemistry) and that your essay is straightforward and easy for readers to understand and perceive your experience in the situation. But you can improve your vocab and writing skills, since the flow of the story can be better and the vocab can be more elaborate. Still, an awesome essay! :D

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    2. Thanks a lot Sittikorn, you seems to have good time reading my essay and I felt like you are really a good reader :) And thanks for the comments, really appreciate your time.

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  2. ^ Roll on the floor laughing is 5 words. But still, the morning dizzy face is really clear because I experience it every morning! You described everything from heads to tail ( morning to afternoon ) and indeed very descriptive. I love the adjectives you use: slimy face, dear EIS, and names that represent each character! Keep up the good work ! :D

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    1. I think I am not that good using adjectives and vocab as good as you and I hope that I can use it like you someday :D And also thanks for reading my loong essay.

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  3. Thank you so much for reminding me about that fantastic trip. Everything you said was informative and also meaningful. I really like the way you named each person and I also felt proud that my lazy friend could have this much motivation to write a thousand word! Anyway, I still can't identify who was that creepy friend of yours. :)

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    1. Oh man thanks for your gratitude. Eventhough I am lazy but if I really have nothing to do, I might do something quite ironic. And about the creepy friend, I can't expose his identity because it would destroyed that person privacy. And thanks for reading my 1000 words essay.

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  4. Hi Kiethibhum! you really improved in your writing. It was fun reading it. The vocab words you use was descriptive. Just by reading, I can pictured it in my mind. I think maybe you could add a climax to your story. It would become nicer. But still you did well, Keep it up.

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    1. You really have a creative and imaginative mind. And I also hope that I could write like this or even better than this. And really thanks for your compliment that I had improved my writing and I will keep it up! At last, thanks for your time that were spent on reading my essay.

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